So magical corner nominated me for this Love in Ten lines Challenge.
Read hers here
Having been bad all my life at following any kinds of rules in writing (But comes after full stops all the time in my world, and haikus have always confused me,) it has been interesting to write, and I am unsure of the results.
Poems have just popped into my head, a few lines which grow as the day passes and I’ll mutter them to myself, most of my poems, the ones that really mean something to me, scream, battle ground, Let it go, love, Uncertain thought, I memorized long before they were put to paper. I’d be sat in a cafe writing the verses on napkins or on my skin. I never knew what to do with them, never knew knew how to use them, never knew what they were for. they have always just been little reminders to myself, milestones to mark certain points in my life.
So sitting down today and focusing on writing a poem was strange, especially one like this, but here it is.
Love! You cannot breathe
Love! Heart on sleeve
Love! On your arms
Love! In your scars
Love! Pinch of salt
Love! Lost in words
Love! Till it hurts
Love! It cannot be
Love! Never be me
I urge anyone who who wants to write for this challenge to write, and add the link to the comment so I can read them all. please, follow the rules and have fun! however i will nominate some fellow writers.
There are so many other, talented blogged I would love to see this, so please feel free.
Here are the rules for the challenge:
1) Write about love using only 10 lines.
2) Use “love” in each line.
3) Each line can only be 4 words long.
4) Nominate others who are up for the challenge.
5) Let them know about the challenge.
6) Title the post, Love in Ten Lines.
7) Include a quote about love.
8) Tag the post ‘ten’.
This is my current favourite ‘love’ song
and To end this i’m going to quote it
“If there’s a prize for rotten judgement
I guess I’ve already won that
No man is worth the aggravation
That’s ancient history, been there, done that!”
Thank for reading lovelies. xxx
Amazing as always… 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on Magical Corner and commented:
Thanks a lot Ellie…its lovely as always.
I love reading your work… 🙂
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love all that is!
Love the heart aches!
Love the good times!
Love the sweet taste!
Love my only fault
love through any storm!
Love after endless tears!
Loves paradise is near!
Love quenching loves thirst
Love, love forever more!
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Nice one!
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Not as good as yours but thank yo!
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It’s equally good. 🙂
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Awh thank you! Check out my newest poem? https://poeticaffrimations.wordpress.com
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You***
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Hi! Nice one again!
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Nice! Here is mine: https://akittude.wordpress.com/2015/03/13/love-in-ten-lines/
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Thanks for the Tag. I hope you will be participating in this month’s Poetry Party, Eloise. So many people find your work inspiring, I amongst them.
I will do this challenge when I get the chance! Thank you!
Memee
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No problem I look forward to the result.
I wrote a poem call crowd mentality the other day and was thinkING about submitting that, but it doesn’t quite fit to the jolliness of a parade, would it be Ok anyway?
Thank you so much
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https://zicoboi.wordpress.com/2015/03/13/love-in-ten-lines/
This is what I could come up with.. I must say.. Its not as easy as it looks… looking forward to learning from you all
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i found it harder to write than i expected too. good work!
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Thanks.. really appreciate it… if you get the chance.. please go through my blogg.. would like to hear your thoughts on what I wrote.. thanks again
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Of course 🙂
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Love without any doubt
Love like a child
Love for your sake
Love that cheese cake
Love beautifies the world
Love forgives all wrong
Love all your neighbours
Love is forever patient
Love his tender heart
Love because you can!
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beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Interesting
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It took me some time, but here’s my attempt http://wp.me/p5nOth-W
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